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Snapshot Of Infantile Paradise

The fantasy vision of a three year old Expression of wonder he couldn’t hold Seeing a picture captured on the phone Thinks it’s not a place in his known zone. Clumps of cloud drifting in sky one by one Turn into a fascinating flotilla of flying swan On their wings latticed sunbeams as fairies rise Framed in a snapshot of the infantile paradise. ______________ April 10, 2021 Contest : Look At This Place Sponsor : Mart Caliri

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Date: 5/5/2021 9:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful/fun-story/write. I enjoyed it. Have a blessed day...........................
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Date: 5/4/2021 5:02:00 PM
Congrats on your 3rd place win! Love the imagery and word-choice!! Though I have to admit, a 3-year-old is a toddler, not an infant (being a dad of 3 toddlers I'm sensitive to these things). But, despite that, 3rd place finish is impressive!
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