Snakes Ate Ladders

Staircase appears to enable due climb 
          Transforms smooth as scales of snake
          Sordid exposed inhibits intent once kind
          Tramples vigour that giving hearts make


          Flattened treads disallow firm foothold
          Turned vertical, depicts frightening slide
          Fresh bread duly duplicates damp mould
          Tough crust disguises grimy rot inside


          Eden believing eyes view rows of roses
          Lenses pink, by strategic cruelty shattered
          Frames deform, broken under bulldozer 
          Petal perspective, machine rigid embattled 


          Tainted by hatred, then inevitably reflects
          Sears from steel eyes to slippery surface
          Casting untoward to all unfolding aspects 
          Vengeance on shoulder deviates purpose 


          Platter of fruit colour, as slime discarded 
          Ladder disputed as useful, fire wood axed
          Torn down resources, despair is imparted
          Narrow funnel filters hope, heavily taxed




                            3rd November 2020

                            Written for Contest:
                   Hello Darkness My Old Friend 
                     Sponsor: Anthony Biaanco

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 11/3/2020 3:54:00 PM
And I had read the title as 'Snakes are Ladders.' Was ready for something akin to 'Chutes and Ladders.' Boy did I get clobbered!! lol. G.L. in the contest, Sigrid! ~ Snake-Climber
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Date: 11/3/2020 8:24:00 PM
Totally!! .... Think it's thick, difficult to gauge sense, slow read... Heavy!! Cheers, always, buddy.
Date: 11/3/2020 6:39:00 AM
I could feel the darkness in your poem Sigrid... I like how you described it and the choice of words..
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