Snaked This Late At Night

My snake is down
Replaced by Ari now
Sleeping so sound
In my arms so proud

I'm feeling crappy
Missing my snake 
Replaced by a beautiful face
Napping grace
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Cayton Avatar
August 23, 2012 at 1:51 AM
unique poetry. enjoyed the concept, one of those deep thought poems that takes awhile to sink in... Cindy
Washington Avatar
August 23, 2012 at 11:15 AM
was ratting off my head whatever came. its about feeling like a snake after trying to be generous to people who's only goal is to milk u dry and still not get the job done. a picture of a snake replaced with something more gentler my grandbaby sleeping peacefully in my bossom
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