Snake Slithers

snake slithers across the grass
gentle breeze mongoose light up the air
warm earth breathe  quietly
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Lindley Avatar
December 19, 2015 at 11:38 AM
I like it. Is it based upon syllable count? 7,9,6?
Osho Avatar
December 19, 2015 at 9:36 PM
bob. the funniest thing is i didnt count any thing at all. may be the music in me...
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