Snake Hole

As a gamble loser, 
Disordered heart, beats now. 
Skin, I feel now tortured and appear, 
As a snake biting blue. 
Oh, I forgot the nature's law 
'' Putting our hands into a snake hole'', 
Death is almost sure. 
Love, sometimes really 
is a venomous snake hole.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Agustin Avatar
July 30, 2024 at 11:59 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 20, 2016 at 10:13 PM
J C.,, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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December 22, 2015 at 7:00 PM
Jayachandran :) stopping by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~
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July 7, 2014 at 10:43 AM
Haha...my hand has been down that hole a time or two...nice write my friend...Tim
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