Rama Balasubramanian Poet Rhyme

Snails Carry Home

Snails carry home on their back,
Weighed by burden, joy they lack
Never keep tensions in your head
Always be carefree, happy instead

Almighty God who created you
Loves and takes care, it is true
Birds nest of twigs, grass, leaves, light
Withstands winds blowing with might

Always be happy, smile joyously little one
While smiling tensions are reduced to none

10.08.2021
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Darlene De Beaulieu August 10, 2021 at 11:24 AM Hello Rama, I like this poem with a message for all. Will be my fav. I like the last two lines of this poem. Enkoy your daymy friend. Darlene De Beaulieu August 10, 2021 at 3:40 PM Hello Rama, you are welcome for the fav. I hope you had a nice day. Enjoy your evening. blessings. Rama Balasubramanian August 10, 2021 at 11:29 AM Thanks for your wonderful comments and honoured by your favourite

Christuraj Alex August 10, 2021 at 10:55 AM Thank you for talking about the word 'owes'. It should be 'woes'. I am notorious for making such careless mistakes.

Christuraj Alex August 10, 2021 at 10:33 AM Great truths are said beautifully and naturally with live imageries. Wish you all the best!

Sotto Poet August 10, 2021 at 10:06 AM Lovely Verse, Rama, nothing worth being sad or carry the burden to death; you painted great imagery in just a few lines. //ver well done. Best wishes with the contest