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Snails Carry Home

Snails carry home on their back, Weighed by burden, joy they lack Never keep tensions in your head Always be carefree, happy instead Almighty God who created you Loves and takes care, it is true Birds nest of twigs, grass, leaves, light Withstands winds blowing with might Always be happy, smile joyously little one While smiling tensions are reduced to none 10.08.2021 BS1

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/10/2021 11:24:00 AM

Hello Rama, I like this poem with a message for all. Will be my fav. I like the last two lines of this poem. Enkoy your daymy friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/10/2021 3:40:00 PM

Hello Rama, you are welcome for the fav. I hope you had a nice day. Enjoy your evening. blessings.

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 8/10/2021 11:29:00 AM

Thanks for your wonderful comments and honoured by your favourite

Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/10/2021 10:55:00 AM

Thank you for talking about the word 'owes'. It should be 'woes'. I am notorious for making such careless mistakes.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/10/2021 10:33:00 AM

Great truths are said beautifully and naturally with live imageries. Wish you all the best!

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/10/2021 10:06:00 AM

Lovely Verse, Rama, nothing worth being sad or carry the burden to death; you painted great imagery in just a few lines. //ver well done. Best wishes with the contest