Snail Heaven

There is no heaven for snails
Nothing but fanciful tails

Gods gift snails our domain and rule 
Thought otherwise judged a fool

Some say look evolution there in snails and slugs 
Our good book blesses us over snails n other bugs 

A snail has a shell and is base devoid of a soul 
God said let us make a slug in our image our role

Monkeys apes and man self evident are seen related
Just a silly madness comparing us and the snail as just stated
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Jones Avatar
August 25, 2010 at 12:46 PM
No the man who says there is no GOD is a fool but one thing about GOD he lets you choose
Culverhouse Avatar
July 30, 2010 at 5:27 PM
Enjoyed, your witty write today.
Brown Avatar
July 30, 2010 at 10:46 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Nigel. Wishing you a beautiful weekend filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
July 29, 2010 at 1:08 PM
Enjoyed a most creative write tonight Nigel and hope u will enter it in the contest posted for couplet... good luck..with luv..
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