Snail

Snail's sticky tongue feet
                                              climb gently the Taro leaves
                                                make path clean and slick

naturehaiku

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Cona Adams

Date: 4/13/2015 8:02:00 AM

Beautiful Haiku, Elai. It's a seven for me.

Elai Cee
Date: 4/13/2015 10:44:00 AM

thanks Cona

Paul Callus

Date: 4/6/2014 7:20:00 AM

Just happened to stumble on this poem; nice imagery...well expressed haiku; enjoyable. // paul

Vassilis Comporozos

Date: 3/22/2014 2:52:00 AM

Beautiful and original

Elai Cee
Date: 3/23/2014 7:48:00 AM

Thanks ... happy to see u here.

Honestly J.T.

Date: 12/25/2013 9:16:00 PM

This reminds me of the movie "Turbo". Nice job

Dan Ravasio

Date: 12/13/2013 9:17:00 AM

love the image this evokes

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper

Date: 11/1/2013 12:51:00 PM

Very Good, these can be so tricky, you pulled it off well -like an old pro! Not to cal you old or anything :D Good Job! MC

Elai Cee
Date: 11/5/2013 8:59:00 AM

thanks Marquis

Carol Eastman

Date: 9/3/2013 7:23:00 PM

Good imagery... interesting work.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/3/2013 7:13:00 AM

I LIKED THE IMAGE INVISIONED

Bl Devnath

Date: 9/1/2013 11:36:00 AM

Excellent observation penned in to haiku poem. Loved always, bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/26/2013 11:39:00 PM

this is so cool. I like it a lot

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/11/2013 6:06:00 AM

- Elai, a very good haiku !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 7/1/2013 5:33:00 AM

Excellent. Simply beautiful one. Tfs

Elai Cee
Date: 7/1/2013 5:34:00 AM

hey Jake, thanks! u know even i love to write lot of poems but the problem is the time... this year busy to handle class. thanks for the visit anyway...

Bl Devnath

Date: 6/30/2013 10:57:00 AM

Beautiful haiku my poetess friend enjoyed. Here near my house many are there I see. Lovely done. Loved always, bl