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Snail

Snail's sticky tongue feet
                                              climb gently the Taro leaves
                                                make path clean and slick

Copyright © Elai Cee | Year Posted 2013

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Cona Adams Date: 4/13/2015 8:02:00 AM Beautiful Haiku, Elai. It's a seven for me. Login to Reply Elai Cee Date: 4/13/2015 10:44:00 AM thanks Cona

Paul Callus Date: 4/6/2014 7:20:00 AM Just happened to stumble on this poem; nice imagery...well expressed haiku; enjoyable. // paul Login to Reply

Vassilis Comporozos Date: 3/22/2014 2:52:00 AM Beautiful and original Login to Reply Elai Cee Date: 3/23/2014 7:48:00 AM Thanks ... happy to see u here.

Honestly J.T. Date: 12/25/2013 9:16:00 PM This reminds me of the movie "Turbo". Nice job Login to Reply

Dan Ravasio Date: 12/13/2013 9:17:00 AM love the image this evokes Login to Reply

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper Date: 11/1/2013 12:51:00 PM Very Good, these can be so tricky, you pulled it off well -like an old pro! Not to cal you old or anything :D Good Job! MC Login to Reply Elai Cee Date: 11/5/2013 8:59:00 AM thanks Marquis

Carol Eastman Date: 9/3/2013 7:23:00 PM Good imagery... interesting work. Login to Reply

Liam Mcdaid Date: 9/3/2013 7:13:00 AM I LIKED THE IMAGE INVISIONED Login to Reply

Bl Devnath Date: 9/1/2013 11:36:00 AM Excellent observation penned in to haiku poem. Loved always, bl Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/26/2013 11:39:00 PM this is so cool. I like it a lot Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/11/2013 6:06:00 AM - Elai, a very good haiku !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Ravi Sathasivam Date: 7/1/2013 5:33:00 AM Excellent. Simply beautiful one. Tfs Login to Reply Elai Cee Date: 7/1/2013 5:34:00 AM hey Jake, thanks! u know even i love to write lot of poems but the problem is the time... this year busy to handle class. thanks for the visit anyway...

Bl Devnath Date: 6/30/2013 10:57:00 AM Beautiful haiku my poetess friend enjoyed. Here near my house many are there I see. Lovely done. Loved always, bl Login to Reply

Karen Anglesey Date: 6/29/2013 4:10:00 PM Elai, a very indepth painting in asnail's life. You captured a vivid image with the words :) Login to Reply

Abdulhafeez Oyewole Date: 6/29/2013 3:01:00 PM Well done on your perfect haiku Elai. AO Login to Reply

John Posey Date: 6/29/2013 2:31:00 AM You have done this haiku very well.... It just has everything... Jake Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 6/28/2013 8:09:00 PM Hello Elai, i like the path you seek... a cute haiku. I love it, a grace trail.... xox~ Linda Login to Reply Elai Cee Date: 6/28/2013 8:52:00 PM Linda, good to see u here . Mz yah!

Michael Ainsley Date: 6/28/2013 4:41:00 PM Life is a wonder isn't Elai . I liked this. Login to Reply Elai Cee Date: 6/28/2013 8:54:00 PM haha! Big check Mike!

Poet Tacito Date: 6/28/2013 2:21:00 PM Beautifully done! Kudos on the Taro leaves... Login to Reply Elai Cee Date: 6/28/2013 8:55:00 PM Hey Drake! thank u!

Nette Onclaud Date: 6/28/2013 1:27:00 PM true to form with delightful images and a great aha moment ... well rendered 'ku, elai..:) huggs Login to Reply Elai Cee Date: 6/28/2013 8:55:00 PM Nette miss yah here... thank u ...appreciate it