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Snail

Snail's sticky tongue feet climb gently the Taro leaves make path clean and slick

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Cona Adams
Date: 4/13/2015 8:02:00 AM
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Beautiful Haiku, Elai. It's a seven for me.
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Elai Cee
Date: 4/13/2015 10:44:00 AM
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thanks Cona
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Paul Callus
Date: 4/6/2014 7:20:00 AM
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Just happened to stumble on this poem; nice imagery...well expressed haiku; enjoyable. // paul
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Vassilis Comporozos
Date: 3/22/2014 2:52:00 AM
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Beautiful and original
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Elai Cee
Date: 3/23/2014 7:48:00 AM
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Thanks ... happy to see u here.
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Honestly J.T.
Date: 12/25/2013 9:16:00 PM
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This reminds me of the movie "Turbo". Nice job
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Dan Ravasio
Date: 12/13/2013 9:17:00 AM
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love the image this evokes
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Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper
Date: 11/1/2013 12:51:00 PM
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Very Good, these can be so tricky, you pulled it off well -like an old pro! Not to cal you old or anything :D Good Job! MC
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Elai Cee
Date: 11/5/2013 8:59:00 AM
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thanks Marquis
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Carol Eastman
Date: 9/3/2013 7:23:00 PM
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Good imagery... interesting work.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/3/2013 7:13:00 AM
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I LIKED THE IMAGE INVISIONED
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Bl Devnath
Date: 9/1/2013 11:36:00 AM
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Excellent observation penned in to haiku poem. Loved always, bl
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/26/2013 11:39:00 PM
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this is so cool. I like it a lot
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/11/2013 6:06:00 AM
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- Elai, a very good haiku !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 7/1/2013 5:33:00 AM
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Excellent. Simply beautiful one. Tfs
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Elai Cee
Date: 7/1/2013 5:34:00 AM
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hey Jake, thanks! u know even i love to write lot of poems but the problem is the time... this year busy to handle class. thanks for the visit anyway...
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Bl Devnath
Date: 6/30/2013 10:57:00 AM
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Beautiful haiku my poetess friend enjoyed. Here near my house many are there I see. Lovely done. Loved always, bl
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Karen Anglesey
Date: 6/29/2013 4:10:00 PM
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Elai, a very indepth painting in asnail's life. You captured a vivid image with the words :)
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Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 6/29/2013 3:01:00 PM
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Well done on your perfect haiku Elai. AO
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John Posey
Date: 6/29/2013 2:31:00 AM
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You have done this haiku very well.... It just has everything... Jake
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Poet Destroyer A
Date: 6/28/2013 8:09:00 PM
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Hello Elai, i like the path you seek... a cute haiku. I love it, a grace trail.... xox~ Linda
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Elai Cee
Date: 6/28/2013 8:52:00 PM
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Linda, good to see u here . Mz yah!
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Michael Ainsley
Date: 6/28/2013 4:41:00 PM
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Life is a wonder isn't Elai . I liked this.
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Elai Cee
Date: 6/28/2013 8:54:00 PM
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haha! Big check Mike!
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Poet Tacito
Date: 6/28/2013 2:21:00 PM
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Beautifully done! Kudos on the Taro leaves...
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Elai Cee
Date: 6/28/2013 8:55:00 PM
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Hey Drake! thank u!
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 6/28/2013 1:27:00 PM
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true to form with delightful images and a great aha moment ... well rendered 'ku, elai..:) huggs
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Elai Cee
Date: 6/28/2013 8:55:00 PM
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Nette miss yah here... thank u ...appreciate it

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