Snail

Snail's sticky tongue feet
                                              climb gently the Taro leaves
                                                make path clean and slick

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Cona Adams

April 13, 2015 at 8:02 AM

Beautiful Haiku, Elai. It's a seven for me.

Elai Cee

April 13, 2015 at 10:44 AM

thanks Cona

Paul Callus

April 6, 2014 at 7:20 AM

Just happened to stumble on this poem; nice imagery...well expressed haiku; enjoyable. // paul

Vassilis Comporozos

March 22, 2014 at 2:52 AM

Beautiful and original

Elai Cee

March 23, 2014 at 7:48 AM

Thanks ... happy to see u here.

Honestly J.T.

December 25, 2013 at 9:16 PM

This reminds me of the movie "Turbo". Nice job

Dan Ravasio

December 13, 2013 at 9:17 AM

love the image this evokes

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper

November 1, 2013 at 12:51 PM

Very Good, these can be so tricky, you pulled it off well -like an old pro! Not to cal you old or anything :D Good Job! MC

Elai Cee

November 5, 2013 at 8:59 AM

thanks Marquis

Carol Eastman

September 3, 2013 at 7:23 PM

Good imagery... interesting work.

Liam Mcdaid

September 3, 2013 at 7:13 AM

I LIKED THE IMAGE INVISIONED

Bl Devnath

September 1, 2013 at 11:36 AM

Excellent observation penned in to haiku poem. Loved always, bl

Andrea Dietrich

July 26, 2013 at 11:39 PM

this is so cool. I like it a lot

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 11, 2013 at 6:06 AM

- Elai, a very good haiku !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam

July 1, 2013 at 5:33 AM

Excellent. Simply beautiful one. Tfs

Elai Cee

July 1, 2013 at 5:34 AM

hey Jake, thanks! u know even i love to write lot of poems but the problem is the time... this year busy to handle class. thanks for the visit anyway...