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S:N:A:F:U:

Status sitting Involved mooted Tracking aloof Under above Altered intact Twisted direct Inside outside Open enclosed Neutral biased Normal haywire Ordered manic Resolved unsure Measured abstract Attends misses Loving loathing Always sometimes Loner teammate Loser trooper Friendly hostile Ugly stunning Callous caring Killing healing Evil gentle Depraved saintly Utmost lowest Pleasing psycho By David Kavanagh Hybrid acrostic/footle Afootstick?

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Sotto Poet

Date: 9/29/2021 3:29:00 PM

David, You perfectly portrayed the many different scenarios that we might go through at any one time. Such is life at any given moment. Weeks of distraction are as bad as eternal damnation.

David Kavanagh
Date: 9/29/2021 3:41:00 PM

Thank you Lasaad, I really am struggling to find time to write lately, I think you're right this manic acrostic, is probably a way of venting my polarised damnation, cheers David

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/29/2021 2:52:00 PM

Very creative David, love the acrostic. Hope your week is going well. Afootstick lol. Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 9/29/2021 3:09:00 PM

Thank you Tom, such is the world at any given moment in time, week busy as hell, not had much time to write lately, Afootstick is the best I can manage for now, cheers David