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Status sitting 
Involved mooted
Tracking aloof 
Under above 
Altered intact
Twisted direct
Inside outside 
Open enclosed 
Neutral biased 

Normal haywire 
Ordered manic
Resolved unsure 
Measured abstract 
Attends misses
Loving loathing 

Always sometimes 
Loner teammate 
Loser trooper 

Friendly hostile 
Ugly stunning 
Callous caring
Killing healing 
Evil gentle 
Depraved saintly 

Utmost lowest
Pleasing psycho

By David Kavanagh 

Hybrid acrostic/footle
Afootstick?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 9/29/2021 3:29:00 PM
David, You perfectly portrayed the many different scenarios that we might go through at any one time. Such is life at any given moment. Weeks of distraction are as bad as eternal damnation.
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David Kavanagh
Date: 9/29/2021 3:41:00 PM
Thank you Lasaad, I really am struggling to find time to write lately, I think you're right this manic acrostic, is probably a way of venting my polarised damnation, cheers David
Date: 9/29/2021 2:52:00 PM
Very creative David, love the acrostic. Hope your week is going well. Afootstick lol. Tom
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Date: 9/29/2021 3:09:00 PM
Thank you Tom, such is the world at any given moment in time, week busy as hell, not had much time to write lately, Afootstick is the best I can manage for now, cheers David

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