Smothered
A senryu exploring the paradox of love, freedom, and control, reflecting human psychology.
Title.
Smothered
#Senryu
(A lone voice whispers)
My love needs freedom
Inescapability
For we've gone too far
5/7/5
(C)
Copyright John Duffy
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