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Michael J. Falotico

Smoldering Thoughts

Rings of smoke drift out
                            from the chimney of my mind 
                                                               and souls fireplace.

Copyright © Michael J. Falotico | Year Posted 2010

on writing and wordshaiku

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Poet Destroyer A

December 10, 2012 at 10:00 PM

Michael, a deep and epic, image..pd

Andrea Dietrich

August 25, 2010 at 9:43 PM

Just love your haiku! LUv, Andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown

August 25, 2010 at 5:42 AM

I am happy your poetry was among the poetry I had a chance to read today Michael. Thank you for sharing your writing. Love, Carol

August 25, 2010 at 2:49 AM

Wow, awesome imagery I can just picture the words drifting from the chimney.. luv W

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

August 24, 2010 at 4:18 PM

Visual.. breathtaking.. romantic and lovely words of expression ... Haiku perfection from my W.K.... Jersey girl makes it a new fav..luv..

August 24, 2010 at 3:45 PM

Very vivid picture Michael. Thanks for your comment on my poem, God Bless, Cile

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