Russell Sivey Poet Rhyme

Smoking Woman

Half naked near a window
Smoking cigarettes
She wafts smoke into the air
Inhaling some hits
She looks out the glass
Noticing me looking in
She smokes more with sass

Russell Sivey

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 21, 2012 at 1:39 PM well written scene of poetic art .. great visual imagery conveying the sass so well Russell luv .. enjoyed my friend .

Richard Lamoureux November 21, 2012 at 7:16 AM It is pretty hard to look away from a beautiful woman, as with your poem it can provide both with pleasure.

Debbie Guzzi November 21, 2012 at 6:47 AM LOL proud Mary aye! Nice one Russ Have a Happy Thanks giving. LIght & Love

Sara Kendrick November 21, 2012 at 5:33 AM Interesting approach..Somewhat a play on the word smoking as it is used today..Thanks for stopping by..This one should win a contest if an entry in one..Sara