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Smoking Woman

Half naked near a window Smoking cigarettes She wafts smoke into the air Inhaling some hits She looks out the glass Noticing me looking in She smokes more with sass
Russell Sivey Form Seguidilla

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/21/2012 1:39:00 PM
well written scene of poetic art .. great visual imagery conveying the sass so well Russell luv .. enjoyed my friend .
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Date: 11/21/2012 7:16:00 AM
It is pretty hard to look away from a beautiful woman, as with your poem it can provide both with pleasure.
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Date: 11/21/2012 6:47:00 AM
LOL proud Mary aye! Nice one Russ Have a Happy Thanks giving. LIght & Love
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Date: 11/21/2012 5:33:00 AM
Interesting approach..Somewhat a play on the word smoking as it is used today..Thanks for stopping by..This one should win a contest if an entry in one..Sara
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