Smoker

A saturated room
A cancerous smoke blower
Killer of my child
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Grisetti Avatar
March 26, 2012 at 10:14 AM
Were you the smoker? I grew up with my parents both smoking and felt suffocated, but thought that's what all parfents did. Great poem.
Goodson Avatar
March 26, 2012 at 11:10 AM
A member of my church asked us to pray for a family who lost their child due to breathing problems; both parents smoked. Thus the inspiration base of the poem
Squyres Avatar
March 12, 2012 at 7:40 AM
So sad !! God Bless !!
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March 9, 2012 at 2:18 PM
Mark, thank you for the comment. and now about your poem..I'm not a smoker... I' never picked up the bad habit.. due to my heavy asthma .. sad haiku,,thank you for sharing..pd
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