Smoker

A saturated room A cancerous smoke blower Killer of my child

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Joann Grisetti

Date: 3/26/2012 10:14:00 AM

Were you the smoker? I grew up with my parents both smoking and felt suffocated, but thought that's what all parfents did. Great poem.

Mark Goodson
Date: 3/26/2012 11:10:00 AM

A member of my church asked us to pray for a family who lost their child due to breathing problems; both parents smoked. Thus the inspiration base of the poem

Debra Squyres

Date: 3/12/2012 7:40:00 AM

So sad !! God Bless !!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/9/2012 2:18:00 PM

Mark, thank you for the comment. and now about your poem..I'm not a smoker... I' never picked up the bad habit.. due to my heavy asthma .. sad haiku,,thank you for sharing..pd