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Smoke

Smoke emanating from heart,
Stirring ideas sprout in brain,
Giving flush to my face...........

Path is scary,
Heart pounces to protrude out 
the breast bone,
Legs shake in trepidation.........

I am awake with heavy eyelids,
With hope that glitters in my 
eyes,
And arms await a tight 
embrace..............

Candles glow in pitch dark,
Only bright spots that 
enlighten,
Moments of togetherness......

You tune up to my delight,
Addicted to me, a surprise,
Smoke engulfs............
To nobody's sight..........!!!



Rhyme -go  jazzy 
Contest - Groove it
Name and theme - Smoke
Written by:
Dr. Upma Sharma
On 19/10/13

Now entered in contest by SKAT A- your best romantic poem

Awarded 5th place win
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Y. Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 10:42 PM
Dr.Upma, l enjoyed reading this romantic write! Congratulations on your win:-)Alexis
Rebstock Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 6:19 PM
Loved the imagery. Congratulations
A  Avatar
August 24, 2015 at 10:55 PM
Dr Upma. Congratulations on your sweet Romantic WIN... SKAT
Toil Avatar
May 9, 2014 at 7:01 AM
Beautiful poem, Dr. Upma! Thanks for your congrats. But we are all #1 in my opinion. Peace...Sam
Callus Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 11:37 AM
This is such a lovely write Dr! one of my personal favourites in contest. loved the two final lines! / congrats. // paul
A. Sharma Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 12:34 PM
Glad u liked !! This is a real emotional one n I love it too ,,, it came out in just few minutes ,, thanks !
A   Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 10:19 AM
Dr Umpa, . Thank you so much for enjoying and supporting my "ANY POEM" contest...... Stop by my latest blog --Raindrops and roses-- if you'd like to receive a cute Congratulations. Wishing all winning poets a great day. Love Linda :-)
A. Sharma Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 12:31 PM
Thanks PD ! Ur contests r awesome .... Any poem any theme any form ... But really tough to contest ! Love always // Upma //
A  Avatar
October 30, 2013 at 12:26 PM
Enjoyed your GROOVE IT win............. ~LOVE SKAT~
A   Avatar
October 28, 2013 at 11:58 AM
Dr Upma, ... congratulations on your win...LINDA
Mehta Avatar
October 28, 2013 at 7:55 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Dr. Upma
Adams Avatar
October 27, 2013 at 8:37 PM
lovely write and fine win...congrats to you :)
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