Emma Fennell Poet I do not know?

Smoke

Smoke filled lungs
Cloud the oxygen trying to get in
Fat veins, dark hearts and burnt lungs
Straining to take a breath
Whilst you’re gripping at your chest
It’s an aggravation, and annoyance 
Quitting is always harder than it seems.

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Matthew Romano June 7, 2011 at 12:49 PM I bet there's so many people who can relate to this Emma. It's a really relevant piece of writing and I think the descriptions you use are perfect and so vivid. Matt xx

Dr.Ram Mehta June 6, 2011 at 3:04 PM Creative and interesting expressions, Emma

Gemma Latham June 6, 2011 at 8:34 AM i like the subject you have chosen here emma, its something that a lot of people face whilst trying to quit

Poet Destroyer A June 5, 2011 at 4:57 PM Emma, not a pleasent feeling ,, I'm one to say thanks God I have bad lungs... I never picked up the sensation to be smokeing... My asthma as a child gave me lousy lungs... Great poem ,, take care,..p.d.