Smog

mountains sip coffee
from the cup of Thunderbird 
smell of gasoline

smog










haiku+a bonus word
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Hamilton Avatar
February 14, 2015 at 12:41 PM
good haiku Rajat hugs
Sirak Avatar
February 14, 2015 at 7:31 AM
I like the imagery in this one. Very stark and real.
Dietrich Avatar
February 13, 2015 at 10:08 PM
a very different kind of image!
Kendrick Avatar
February 13, 2015 at 11:11 AM
Interesting work..The plants and trees help cleanse the air but sometimes it is over powered with so much of the elements that clog it..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Guzzi Avatar
February 13, 2015 at 10:18 AM
confusing my friend the mountain can not sip coffee? the thunderbird does not own a cup? haiku are factual sensory not imaginary dear Light & Love
Chakrabarty Avatar
February 13, 2015 at 10:41 AM
Thank you Debbie. I'll do what you say. You are right. Love
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