Smitten Love

Smitten love is like the rain!
Everytime it's pouring down;
Your umbrellas out again.
Written love is bitten love,
Just screaming out in pain.
                                 --- Princefreakasso
                                     (Artist and Poet)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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May 18, 2015 at 1:16 PM
Fantastic how you captured it well..Princcess Laurice
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June 6, 2012 at 6:49 AM
When I click on one of your poems I know it will be exceptional Prince. Thank you for sharing your words with us. I hope all is well with you and yours. I will stop back again soon. Love, Carol
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June 28, 2011 at 4:15 PM
Beautiful words about love.
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December 3, 2009 at 8:40 PM
Great analogy - love it.
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December 3, 2009 at 11:29 AM
Interesting thoughts put to pen. Keep the creative and magical pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
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