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Cheshire cat atop her throne Leaving not to all alone Mice long gone in fear of fight Be still the home at rest tonight In maker's bed aloft of pine Beauty waits in satin fine Soft rays dance upon her hide Along side hope the loving bride Rest not weary eyes once shed In grace of dainty heros bred Succumb to whispers sent away Rise up strong another day Brush off the blue strung so tight Brave the wonders in peeked light

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/9/2016 7:20:00 PM
Dancing with the drum, of joy and youth, only the time will teach us the truth....nice Tim
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Date: 9/5/2016 5:25:00 PM
You are a great poet Tim. Your poetry always reads like music. A Fav!
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Date: 9/4/2016 10:06:00 PM
I read this as a sonnet, great write! :)
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Date: 9/4/2016 3:15:00 PM
I say , classic rhyme and interesting narrative poem here. Begins in a captivating way and phrasing then moves onto sublime description. Nice to read from u again, pls do comment my latest poem on eclipse
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Date: 9/4/2016 2:11:00 PM
this is great Tim :)-luloo
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Date: 9/4/2016 12:13:00 PM
Lovely flow and rhyming in this one, tim. It is kind of like a little sonnet!
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Date: 9/4/2016 8:50:00 AM
Is the second verse referencing the heavens? Sorry, I seem to be visually impaired at the moment...great rhyme though.
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