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Smiling In the Dawn

Smiling In The Dawn Haiku - Tanka ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ tis natures rhythm heart beating in seasons climate change cofounds robins singing out of tune winter sun confusing all winter retreating sunny spring has arrived natures telling lies should we give up no spring will emerge believe daffodils dancing we all wait for spring the doors to summertime joy flowering meadows buzz pm dusk still dark with a wizardly spell each time I blink dusk smiles a smile of lightness concedes smiling in the dawn sunshine a promise a northwesterly wind denies cold—birds all puffed up crocus all in bloom nature I will not be denied snowdrops dancing too cuckoo’s don’t make spring first swallows not a summer fledglings—life anew true love so precious nature singing out aloud forever it pleads

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Date: 2/22/2018 12:26:00 AM
So beautiful... Enjoyed it...
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Mick Talbot
Date: 2/22/2018 3:00:00 AM
Supraja, Thank you for your nice comment... Mick
Date: 2/21/2018 3:06:00 PM
Very nice ! I like how you showed us so many things in this poem :)
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Mick Talbot
Date: 2/21/2018 11:57:00 PM
Heidi, Many thanks, appreciated! Best wishes!
Date: 2/21/2018 2:00:00 PM
There is no right or wrong in Nature only consequences,
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Mick Talbot
Date: 2/21/2018 10:16:00 PM
Hi Carlos, So very succinctly put! It has inspired me to qualify my reasoning, which I hope is never realised. Thank you... Mick check: https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/haiku_-_a_warning_-_concrete_the_tree_of_life_is_not_996351

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