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I was an experienced family therapist, helping families maintain functionality, As wandering, starlit seasons maintain all nature, being rooted in practicality. I loved preserving healthy relationships, that foundation of healthy societies; And kept up a fruitful dialogue between the families, which relieved anxieties. I, myself, had come from a happy home, never causing huge worries or fears, For dear ones that I loved, never seemed to be leaving, as silvery cloud tears. Friends dropped by like colorful fall, never failing to fetch the fondest smiles, In the midst of a watchful, apricot noon, when rouge butterflies were in exile. Family flew past fluffy clouds each fall, when autumn was pretty and frumpy, Like field blossoms of windswept fragrance, elegantly disheveled and grumpy. I lived in the house of sweet memories, and smiling faces on rose hued walls, As rouge sun swims in roses nightly, prior to descending the precipitous falls. Street performers were small, singing sparrows, on my swank avenue of sun; Like a solo turns into a chorus, creating a prettier song-more elegantly done! Nearsighted neighbors came to see me nights, and gaze at nacre pearl moon, On the peach, peony porch of my placidness, in colors of the faded afternoon. All were seized in summer's saffron grip, creating orange juice mist sunsets, Like walking away, when it is best, and yet brave enough to have no regrets. Flowers thrilled hot, apricot hours, and birdsong excited long, obsidian nights, Cats slept on porches of ruby pansies, their short, sweet lives full of delights. Then persistent tragedy finally struck me, when I lost a dear family member; And while I suffered long and cried, I was comforted by smiles I remembered! I found great solace in my work, for helping others paves the way for smiles, Like keeping glad eyes on the summer garden, to delve its newest color files. I found a love and was eventually married, like first tango of sun and planets; And we and our children continue family traditions, like lofty birdsong habits. Today, my grief is much diminished, like storm clouds fading into saffron sun, For minds full of memories, help loving hearts heal, like rosy day just begun.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 12/30/2023 6:00:00 PM
You are just a beautiful spiritual human soul, happy new year, Kelli
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/31/2023 1:55:00 PM
Deepest thanks for your lovely compliment, Kelli. Happy New Year. :)
Date: 12/3/2023 2:21:00 PM
I like your poem. It is full of friends, love, and nature's colors Thanks for a great read.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/3/2023 4:15:00 PM
You're most welcome, Hilda. Thank you for your warm words of appreciation. :)
Date: 12/2/2023 2:10:00 PM
Impressive tale-telling, Evelyn. Your rhythm is impeccable, and your rhyme scheme is impeccable. You have a beautiful command of language and the art of couplets is your forte. Lovely grins that come from the core of a person's being when they reflect on the past. This great piece is a fave.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/2/2023 2:38:00 PM
Thank you for your kind, complimentary remarks, and your fave, my friend. It is gladdening to read your comments today. Blessings.
Date: 12/2/2023 7:02:00 AM
Great storytelling, are you a therapist? As always your lines flow so well and your rhymes brilliant as always.. You have wonderful way with words and do couplets so well..
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/2/2023 2:32:00 PM
I extend my heartfelt thanks for your kind compliments. I'm not a therapist, though. I do a bit of research on each occupation, before attempting to write about it. I hope your day is nice. :)
Date: 12/2/2023 6:17:00 AM
Ahhh, this week you are a therapist. Nice. At first I thought, how can she relate when her life was so rosy, but then the tragedy of loss. Empathy works better when one has experienced pain. You really pour yourself into these fictional writes, the details are amazing and feel so real
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/2/2023 2:25:00 PM
I like the way that one can live so many lives through the magic of writing. I'm glad you enjoyed the story surrounding this week's occupation. I deeply appreciate your lovely compliments, as well. :)
Date: 12/2/2023 5:20:00 AM
Beautiful smiles emanating from the depth of heart reminiscing in memories. A FAVE for the eloquent images that undulate in this write on highs and lows of life. I like the uplifting turn in the ending.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/2/2023 2:19:00 PM
Thank you for the delight of your comment and your FAVE, my friend. Have a nice weekend. :)
Date: 12/2/2023 3:47:00 AM
I love how you’ve used imagery here to tell us your story. Brilliant. One who finds solace in spreading smiles, etc, i love always your use of colors and flowers to depicts deep meanings that convey so much in sheer eloquence. Absolute pleasure reading this from the very first line i was intrigued to read more until the end. Felt so much.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/2/2023 2:14:00 PM
Thank you for the compliment, Tom.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/2/2023 2:13:00 PM
It's so great to discover this poem resonated with you, my friend. I find the fact that you enjoyed it, truly delighting. I love colors and flowers, and I'm glad you do, too. Many thanks, Ink, for letting me know of your pleasure in this tale. :)
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Tom Woody
Date: 12/2/2023 6:17:00 AM
Evelyn spins an awesome tale

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