Smiles and Frowns

I love this one to Kash. You are awesome in your write, and thanks for sharing.

Kash. , congratulations, with your senryu in Michael's "Smiles & Frown" contest.. God Bless~PD

Congratulations on the super win in Michael's contest Kash. Love, Carol

Beautiful - well deserved to win.

gosh, how come I have not commented on this one. I can't believe I missed it??? what marvelous senryu, Kash. Big congrats.

roll over and celebrate, kashi.. sweet congrats!..yesss!..:) huggs!

I like Mandy's comments below..haha...yeah, I hope the butterfly in your poem is not the same one, poor lil guy! Love the contrasting senryu in your winning entry...written with pure excellence..gwendolen

dreams and nightmares aye? Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

congrats Kash on an outstanding write and win luv .. awesome as always ..

Congratulations Kash I have noticed lots of poets use butterflies, they really get a battering sometimes poor things. , well done xx

Congrats Kash on your win.... Michael

touching... congrats on your win!

so right on continuity and imagery.. you tied both ends real well.. good luck and huggs, bud... forgot to write for michael's contest!...:)

nice work

fantastic write on the theme! i love it. Good luck and best wishes, Kash.

Love the way you approached this theme; best wishes.

A Lovely Dream, being destroyed. Good post for the contet. - oxox hug Anne-Lise :)

Wow, what beautiful statements of truth you have presented here my friend! I love the smiles, but the frown stands out so much more and makes such a powerful statement, it's incredible Kashi(or do you prefer being called Kash?) I am amazed at your wondrous talent through this poem, I loved every piece of it...Great Work!!