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Smiles and Frowns

Butterfly dreams touching rose buds of life hopeful tomorrow sudden storm breaking the butterfly wings withered rose buds. ************************* 27th August 2012

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Lillie Williams

Date: 11/30/2012 1:22:00 PM

I love this one to Kash. You are awesome in your write, and thanks for sharing.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/5/2012 7:39:00 PM

Kash. , congratulations, with your senryu in Michael's "Smiles & Frown" contest.. God Bless~PD

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/5/2012 5:24:00 AM

Congratulations on the super win in Michael's contest Kash. Love, Carol

Joann Grisetti

Date: 9/4/2012 6:45:00 AM

Beautiful - well deserved to win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/3/2012 9:07:00 PM

gosh, how come I have not commented on this one. I can't believe I missed it??? what marvelous senryu, Kash. Big congrats.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/3/2012 2:01:00 PM

roll over and celebrate, kashi.. sweet congrats!..yesss!..:) huggs!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 9/3/2012 1:00:00 PM

I like Mandy's comments below..haha...yeah, I hope the butterfly in your poem is not the same one, poor lil guy! Love the contrasting senryu in your winning entry...written with pure excellence..gwendolen

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/3/2012 9:43:00 AM

dreams and nightmares aye? Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/3/2012 9:06:00 AM

congrats Kash on an outstanding write and win luv .. awesome as always ..

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 9/3/2012 6:55:00 AM

Congratulations Kash I have noticed lots of poets use butterflies, they really get a battering sometimes poor things. , well done xx

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 9/3/2012 6:52:00 AM

Congrats Kash on your win.... Michael

Apoorva Patrikar

Date: 9/3/2012 6:47:00 AM

touching... congrats on your win!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/29/2012 12:38:00 AM

so right on continuity and imagery.. you tied both ends real well.. good luck and huggs, bud... forgot to write for michael's contest!...:)

Loo Roll

Date: 8/28/2012 7:32:00 AM

nice work

Len Gasun

Date: 8/27/2012 9:48:00 AM

fantastic write on the theme! i love it. Good luck and best wishes, Kash.

Modupe Sefunmi

Date: 8/27/2012 8:40:00 AM

Love the way you approached this theme; best wishes.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/27/2012 8:15:00 AM

A Lovely Dream, being destroyed. Good post for the contet. - oxox hug Anne-Lise :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/27/2012 8:10:00 AM

Wow, what beautiful statements of truth you have presented here my friend! I love the smiles, but the frown stands out so much more and makes such a powerful statement, it's incredible Kashi(or do you prefer being called Kash?) I am amazed at your wondrous talent through this poem, I loved every piece of it...Great Work!!

Russell Sivey
Date: 8/27/2012 8:11:00 AM

By the way, your Avatar is awesome!