Smiles

smiles innuendos glances to thaw the wintry moon Submitted for STANDARD CONTEST 55 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - December 6, 2017 - RANKED 1ST

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/9/2017 12:04:00 PM

Interesting work..Those craters come across of interesting smiles..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/10/2017 8:06:00 PM

Thanks, Sara.

Paul Callus

Date: 12/8/2017 1:24:00 PM

The wintry moon in not immune to such behavior, Line:) Enjoyed the image and its resulting effects! Congrats on placing first. Regards // paul

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/8/2017 8:37:00 PM

Thanks, Paul. I vaguely remember those years.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/6/2017 9:36:00 PM

Love your haiku!

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/6/2017 9:55:00 PM

Thank you, Kim.

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/6/2017 7:12:00 PM

An awesome and intriguing Haiku Line. Well done!

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/6/2017 9:58:00 PM

Thank you, Susan.

Lewis Raynes

Date: 12/6/2017 7:05:00 PM

your haiku's are always very deep Line, nice.

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/6/2017 9:58:00 PM

Thank you, Lewis. I appreciate the comments.