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Smiles

S hare your happiness and M ake someone's day better I nclude everyone around you in a L oving E mbrace S ave someone from loneliness

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Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 9/13/2012 10:35:00 PM

Very nice acrostic. Love it. a smile :) and a rose @---->----- for you. Well done.

Success Akpojotor

Date: 9/10/2012 12:29:00 PM

Greatly pen'd. Thank you for putting a SMILE on my face. Merci Carol!

Apoorva Patrikar

Date: 9/8/2012 11:50:00 PM

great acrostic! u gave me the first smile of my day :)

Jun Tumalad

Date: 8/20/2012 4:19:00 AM

Acrostic is inspirational, loving other people unconditionally! Thanks for your poem.

Laurel Larison

Date: 7/13/2012 10:21:00 AM

wonderfully written. You write great poetry my friend. xo laurel

Dont Givein

Date: 5/26/2012 6:35:00 PM

Really great write! its always nice to share a smile and i love how it flows :)

Joi Murphy

Date: 5/11/2012 11:13:00 PM

Very nice phrasing

John Rhinem

Date: 5/9/2012 8:11:00 AM

Smile ˜ Good Morning, My Precious Sweeet, Beautiful Carol * Sooo Nice To See You Again * To Behold 'Your Beauty,' Upon This Beautiful Day * Made Even More Beautiful, By The Beautiful Touch, Of 'Beautiful You * My Love, Forevermore; '" John!:) ˜

Date: 5/9/2012 8:14:00 AM

...."A Priceless Favourite, 'Tis My Beautiful Girl.'" *

Diwakar Pokhriyal

Date: 3/28/2012 1:09:00 PM

Really Nice...:)

Joe Maverick

Date: 3/18/2012 12:12:00 AM

Pleased to read this positive and clever write today Carol;

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/14/2012 11:19:00 AM

sweet as is this beautiful poem, Carol. just like you. harry

Russell Sivey

Date: 3/12/2012 4:45:00 PM

Sweet, such a sweet little write that you have written for all of us Carol! I believe your best line has to be the line I "Include everyone around you in a" what a great line that one truly is! I really enjoyed your poem that I have read this evening! I smiled when I read this write, your ultimate purpose! I love your poem immensely! Beautifully Done!!