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Though oft times we do not see Every day contains a smile Each one is a fragile gem Sorrows grip on us revile Even if for just a while Welcomed by the eyes that see Happiness it can't defile This precious gift from you to me
Originally written for "HUTAIN THIS ONE" contest. Rhyme scheme ababbcbc By Bob Quigley

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/17/2012 10:56:00 AM
Wonderfully worded a sweetest feeling of inner sense in last two lines....'Happiness it.......to me'. Loved and enjoyed both, bl
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Date: 1/17/2012 9:46:00 AM
congrats Bob on third place win luv.. brilliant lines..
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Bob Quigley
Date: 1/17/2012 10:31:00 AM
Appreciate it Linda-Marie
Date: 1/17/2012 3:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win!
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Bob Quigley
Date: 1/17/2012 7:47:00 AM
Thanks Kelly
Date: 1/17/2012 2:49:00 AM
Lovely bob congratulations xx
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Bob Quigley
Date: 1/17/2012 7:47:00 AM
Many thanks Mandy
Date: 1/16/2012 5:11:00 PM
Lovely, Congratulations on your win Bob. Elizabeth
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Bob Quigley
Date: 1/16/2012 9:12:00 PM
Thank you Elizabeth
Date: 1/16/2012 4:26:00 PM
Very sweet one, Bob. Congrats on your win.
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Bob Quigley
Date: 1/16/2012 9:12:00 PM
Much appreciated Andrea
Date: 1/16/2012 4:12:00 PM
Congrats Bob Quigley! Great hutain. Gwendolen
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Bob Quigley
Date: 1/16/2012 9:12:00 PM
Thank you Gwen.
Date: 1/16/2012 11:48:00 AM
Congrats my friend on your fine write and win... Michael
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Bob Quigley
Date: 1/16/2012 3:03:00 PM
Thank you Michael
Date: 1/16/2012 10:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Any Form/Theme" contest Bob. Love, Carol
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Bob Quigley
Date: 1/16/2012 3:03:00 PM
Thanks Carol
Date: 7/26/2011 8:19:00 AM
It feels so good to be able to sit here and read your very creative writing this morning. I do hope to come back soon and read more of your excellent work Bob. Love, Carol
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Bob Quigley
Date: 7/26/2011 10:45:00 AM
Thanks Carol
Date: 7/25/2011 10:44:00 PM
so sweet, Bob. Good luck in the contest. I sure hope to try this one soon. Luv, Andrea
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Bob Quigley
Date: 7/26/2011 10:45:00 AM
My first try. We'll see. Thanks for stopping by.
Date: 7/25/2011 10:21:00 PM
That was perfect!...Loved it.Thank you for visiting my poems,and the kind comments. Dan
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Bob Quigley
Date: 7/26/2011 10:46:00 AM
And my thanks to you as well
Date: 7/25/2011 9:04:00 PM
Lovely take on the theme of the contest, Bob
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Bob Quigley
Date: 7/26/2011 10:46:00 AM
As always, your comments are very much appreciated

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