Smiles

Though oft times we do not see Every day contains a smile Each one is a fragile gem Sorrows grip on us revile Even if for just a while Welcomed by the eyes that see Happiness it can't defile This precious gift from you to me
Originally written for "HUTAIN THIS ONE" contest. Rhyme scheme ababbcbc By Bob Quigley
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Devnath  Avatar
January 17, 2012 at 10:56 AM
Wonderfully worded a sweetest feeling of inner sense in last two lines....'Happiness it.......to me'. Loved and enjoyed both, bl
Sweetheart Avatar
January 17, 2012 at 9:46 AM
congrats Bob on third place win luv.. brilliant lines..
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January 17, 2012 at 10:31 AM
Appreciate it Linda-Marie
Zakerski Avatar
January 17, 2012 at 3:29 AM
Congratulations on your win!
Quigley Avatar
January 17, 2012 at 7:47 AM
Thanks Kelly
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 17, 2012 at 2:49 AM
Lovely bob congratulations xx
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January 17, 2012 at 7:47 AM
Many thanks Mandy
Scholtz Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 5:11 PM
Lovely, Congratulations on your win Bob. Elizabeth
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January 16, 2012 at 9:12 PM
Thank you Elizabeth
Dietrich Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 4:26 PM
Very sweet one, Bob. Congrats on your win.
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January 16, 2012 at 9:12 PM
Much appreciated Andrea
Song Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 4:12 PM
Congrats Bob Quigley! Great hutain. Gwendolen
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January 16, 2012 at 9:12 PM
Thank you Gwen.
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January 16, 2012 at 11:48 AM
Congrats my friend on your fine write and win... Michael
Quigley Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 3:03 PM
Thank you Michael
Brown Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 10:51 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Any Form/Theme" contest Bob. Love, Carol
Quigley Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 3:03 PM
Thanks Carol
Brown Avatar
July 26, 2011 at 8:19 AM
It feels so good to be able to sit here and read your very creative writing this morning. I do hope to come back soon and read more of your excellent work Bob. Love, Carol
Quigley Avatar
July 26, 2011 at 10:45 AM
Thanks Carol
Dietrich Avatar
July 25, 2011 at 10:44 PM
so sweet, Bob. Good luck in the contest. I sure hope to try this one soon. Luv, Andrea
Quigley Avatar
July 26, 2011 at 10:45 AM
My first try. We'll see. Thanks for stopping by.
Kearley Avatar
July 25, 2011 at 10:21 PM
That was perfect!...Loved it.Thank you for visiting my poems,and the kind comments. Dan
Quigley Avatar
July 26, 2011 at 10:46 AM
And my thanks to you as well
Mehta Avatar
July 25, 2011 at 9:04 PM
Lovely take on the theme of the contest, Bob
Quigley Avatar
July 26, 2011 at 10:46 AM
As always, your comments are very much appreciated
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