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Smile Your On Candid Camera

<                                         sphinx ~ head
                                             who ~ said

                                           roman ~ God
                                           without ~ bod


                                           shadow ~ illusion
                                           causing ~ confussion


                                           butte ~ mesa
                                           I ~ guess ~ a

                             
                                           transition ~ zone
                                           with-out   ~ phone

                      
                                            oh ~ my   ~    cydonia
                                            don't ~ all ~ just ~ wanna ~ ya



Entry For
Carolyn Devonshire's
Sphinx Head On Mars Contest
G.L. All

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/12/2010 6:16:00 PM

Very very creative write on Sphinx On Mars. Good luck , Katherine

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/12/2010 12:39:00 PM

Hi Katherine, I received a haiku about a squirrel as your entry for the contest instead of this great couplet. Could you check and be sure you enter this one? You may have two poems by the same name. That's how it appears. Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/12/2010 9:47:00 AM

Interesting approach, Katharine. I found that challenge difficult, but I am glad you were able to do it with couplet form! good luck in the contest. Luv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/12/2010 7:33:00 AM

Another fun entry Katherine... good luck in that contest too and a super layout of the piece... enjoyed this happy Sunday and look for your gift..mailed it yesterday afternoon from New Jersey luv.. enjoy this happy Sunday...