Smile Now Cry Later

All along the concrete jungle a silence is heard, throughout the streets above & below.  
A child is weeping ever so low.  If you listen closely, hear the tears hitting the cold floor,  
the slamming of doors, wanting of more.  Listen closely, dont be distracted,  for if you 
are you will miss that the child is acting and actually laughing.  Laughing at you and 
laughing at me.  Chuckles of hate, snickers of pain, LOL ROTFL LMFAO!    Laughing at 
you and laughing at  me.  Look at the sound, do you see what I see.  See that this life 
of pain, that he is living in. he is hurting inside but hopeful and praying that the other 
side, might hold a better life.  A life that is totally unlike this, His smile is make believe, 
like a clown wearing his frown upside down.  For you see its a fantasy to be happy 
when you are his expression.  He wants to express get the all of it off his chest.  But he 
knows whats best, lock it away, there it will stay.  Til he reaches the other side and 
unlocks it to play.  Tossing out used needles day after day.  Lol is al I can say.  This side 
is like that side,,  outside the box is a mirror image of inside with nowhere to hide.  His 
little world seems redundant and lame.  Playing a game.  Cat & mouse where he is the 
cat and we are the mice.  We play the game for all of our lives.  His smile is pain and the 
source of his hate, comes deep rooted in pain, no pain no gain, or so they say.  Ooops 
up side his head!  Do the cross, say good nite to mommy and off to bed.  Only to awake 
to the same thing on different day.  He is smiling now but will be crying later,  cheesin 
right now til the pain sets in later,  He is laughing right now so that he can scream it out 
later!!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 5/16/2011 5:36:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Eduardo. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 5/13/2011 2:24:00 PM
Nice postive and inspirational narrative, Eduardo
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Date: 5/12/2011 5:21:00 PM
So enjoyed reading your creative poetry tonight.. welcome to this website ..have fun and enjoy as u share with luv.. check out our free contests .. good luck..luv..
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