Carl Fraser Poet Rhyme

Smile Effect

I could have commented on your sexy body
 How you looked in high heel shoes
They way you look when you walk away
Like your knowing what you do

I could have complimented you on that hot red dress
The way it flowed gracefully over those great hips
And how Im amazed whenever you talk to me
How Im distracted by those ruby lips
                                                          
Yes all these things attracted me to you 
Im enthralled by your moves and classy style.
But there was a moment when my heart melted
Yes it melted when I saw your smile

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Carlene Simpson January 31, 2016 at 10:38 PM Thank you Carl......my best asset yet!

Poet Destroyer A January 30, 2016 at 11:57 PM Hi, Carl. stopping to leave a SMILE. :)

Poet Destroyer A January 29, 2016 at 11:48 AM Carl, some smiles are unforgettable. You could have, complimented this and that. But, it was life that captured you by surprise. A lovely write. Different, but lovely. I hope you post another poem. I'm in the mood of reading new writes from you dear friend... Hugs. LINDA Carl Fraser January 29, 2016 at 10:25 PM Alas it is a fictional write my friend. But I do seem to melt from a smile. Thanks for reading Linda