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Smile awhile in this lucid dream Flow like the morning breeze Be nonchalant to thoughts that stream Embrace, hold and release The game is hide and seek We’re allowed a sneak peek Dance of bliss, cheek to cheek Mile by mile Smile awhile 18-May-2022 Quietus

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Date: 5/18/2022 6:47:00 PM
Yes! You managed to give rhythm and musicality in a natural way, I really liked it!
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Date: 5/18/2022 8:14:00 PM
Thank you, Marco!
Date: 5/18/2022 9:40:00 AM
You play hide and seek even in dreams.
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Date: 5/18/2022 9:45:00 AM
“… for life is but a dream”

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