Unseeking Seeker Poet Rhyme

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Smile Awhile

Smile awhile in this lucid dream
Flow like the morning breeze
Be nonchalant to thoughts that stream
Embrace, hold and release 

The game is hide and seek
We’re allowed a sneak peek
Dance of bliss, cheek to cheek

Mile by mile
Smile awhile

18-May-2022
Quietus 

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Marco Chies May 18, 2022 at 6:47 PM Yes! You managed to give rhythm and musicality in a natural way, I really liked it! Unseeking Seeker May 18, 2022 at 8:14 PM Thank you, Marco!

Victor Buhagiar May 18, 2022 at 9:40 AM You play hide and seek even in dreams. Unseeking Seeker May 18, 2022 at 9:45 AM “… for life is but a dream”