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Smile and Tears

Over the tree birds are free flying high up the sky with wings flapped like hands clapped sounding loud above the cloud. Somewhere out there birds are crying for the trees are dying and the land where they dwell and like a tragic spell the lands too are barren like the distant mountain finding hope from the rain to shed a tear like a fountain. September 17, 2022 Charlie New-Ku Poetry Contest (2nd place) Sponsored by: Charles Messina

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Date: 10/21/2022 1:56:00 PM
Congratulations on this environmental winning work. Way to go. Yes, we need to save and plant trees all over the world to keep everything in balance. Sara
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R. B. Cawis
Date: 10/21/2022 3:54:00 PM
Thank you very much... My first time in this form... I still have much to learn...
Date: 10/19/2022 9:47:00 AM
Great environmental concern expressed in, SMILE AND TEARS. Great juxtaposition. Congratulations!
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R. B. Cawis
Date: 10/19/2022 10:13:00 AM
Thank you very much... Trying to find a way to be an advocate of the environment through poetry...
Date: 10/18/2022 3:44:00 PM
Superb writing, Roger. Great job with this difficult form and thanks for entering my contest. Congratulations on your win! Charlie
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R. B. Cawis
Date: 10/18/2022 4:43:00 PM
Thank you very much for the placement... It was both thrilling and challenging...

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