Smile

With her smile she plays my frayed heart-strings like Chopin; a sweet melody.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/7/2017 6:16:00 PM

I love this one Phil it beautiful. have a nice evening my friend.

Funom Makama

Date: 6/30/2017 9:03:00 AM

This is fantastic, so fantastic. Coming to this page feels predestined because I feel so satisfied. Thanks for the wonderful share.

Phil Capitano
Date: 6/30/2017 10:14:00 AM

I'm glad I made you smile, you just did the same for me. Namaste.

Alfred Berggren

Date: 6/19/2017 11:46:00 AM

Good haiku that mentions a great pianist.

Phil Capitano
Date: 6/19/2017 2:39:00 PM

Thanks, I think the image works well, music and beauty is art.

Becca Teagan

Date: 6/5/2017 3:00:00 PM

Lovely haiku :)

Maria Williams

Date: 6/1/2017 8:55:00 AM

I love Chopin and I love this haiku of yours Phil..... Maria

Honestly J.T.

Date: 5/30/2017 7:27:00 PM

well done and God bless -JT