Smile

i have heard my smile was light 
it was comforting 
it was friendly 
it was welcoming 

 wished it had stayed like that
i wish i would never be down again
but it was to  late
you all know wishes has to end 
there like fairy tails
just like Cinderella
the clock struck 12 
and the wish was finished

that was the day i stopped smiling
the day i stopped caring
the day i stopped worrying 
people would never see that smile again

that's the day when you said goodbye
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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January 30, 2011 at 7:33 PM
deep write, like the second stanza, enjoyed your write,..p.d.
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January 30, 2011 at 1:43 PM
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January 30, 2011 at 9:43 AM
nice poem heartfelt http://thepoets.webs.com
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