Smile

Shatters grief away,
Manages anger and fear,
Invite all the way.
Love it and acquire the sheer
Energy for a good day!


TANKACROSTIC Poetry contest 
Rhyme scheme:  a/b/a/b/a 
Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich
Date: 18-05-2021
Placed : 4th
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Merryman Avatar
June 8, 2021 at 2:25 PM
Well done, Patri! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
Venkata Ramana Avatar
June 9, 2021 at 5:43 AM
Thanks a lot for the compliments.
Y. Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 2:14 PM
Hi Patri, You penned a well-written acrostic on a smile. Congratulations on your win. Have a great day. PS, I chose smile too:-) Alexis
Venkata Ramana Avatar
June 7, 2021 at 2:56 AM
Thanks a lot for the best compliments.
Dietrich Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 12:17 PM
I really loved how you did your last two lines. Sheer energy, awesome! Congrats in my contest.
Venkata Ramana Avatar
June 7, 2021 at 2:55 AM
Thanks a lot for the compliments.
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace