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Smile

Shatters grief away, Manages anger and fear, Invite all the way. Love it and acquire the sheer Energy for a good day! TANKACROSTIC Poetry contest Rhyme scheme: a/b/a/b/a Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich Date: 18-05-2021 Placed : 4th

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Kim Merryman

Date: 6/8/2021 2:25:00 PM

Well done, Patri! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 6/9/2021 5:43:00 AM

Thanks a lot for the compliments.

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/6/2021 2:14:00 PM

Hi Patri, You penned a well-written acrostic on a smile. Congratulations on your win. Have a great day. PS, I chose smile too:-) Alexis

Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 6/7/2021 2:56:00 AM

Thanks a lot for the best compliments.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/6/2021 12:17:00 PM

I really loved how you did your last two lines. Sheer energy, awesome! Congrats in my contest.

Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 6/7/2021 2:55:00 AM

Thanks a lot for the compliments.