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Blue ocean hands take away my senses 
vibrating in my chest
wave crest high sea low
my organs are spilling from my open 
mouth and I'm laughing
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Kendrick Avatar
November 7, 2018 at 1:50 PM
Creative work ...Reads like a sea coaster ride. Sara
Collins Avatar
December 7, 2018 at 12:42 PM
Thank you! I was going for the imagery
Green Avatar
November 7, 2018 at 1:48 PM
Very creative. I like the abstract feel of this.
Collins Avatar
December 7, 2018 at 12:42 PM
Thank you! I really appreciate your feedback
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