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Smelling the Flowers

(8/17/12) Always looking at the clock, wondering about the hour Never stopping to smell the flowers. There was a time that life was at a slower pace Now it seems we’re always in a race. The one thing that I know is that we don’t Spend enough time to watch our children grow. I saw my marriage failing because I was Too busy running around ,as she looked at me Without making a sound. You can keep quite to a certain point in life then she explodes , and it’s not very nice. The closeness that you knew seems to be Fading away -and with you she doesn’t want to stay That is when you realize that your fires have to be rekindled No ashes will you see - for this love will not be a faded love In the books of history. We then reaffirmed it in our minds That this love would last for a very long time And when our bodies became entwined It was like sharing a bottle of wine. We savored the juices as they flowed For we had become connoisseurs this much we know. I started to smell the flowers as I did In my younger years, as for losing my wife I no longer have that fear. SLOW DOWN AND SMELL THE FLOWERS !

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Date: 8/17/2012 4:38:00 PM
So true Louis....we forget the most important in life....love, care, smile....and smell the flowers. - Very well written in a beautiful poem. - Have a lovely weekend - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/17/2012 4:35:00 PM
Another great poem you have written. I for one am happy for you. I agree with you - we should slow down and smell the flowers. many blessings to you. Lucilla
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