Smear Us Free

Love takes its toll on every faltering form Minds are all a blur, a never-ending storm They all in time take pleasure in other wretches’ pain Relieving their blistery hearts, subsiding the pouring rain And as they cite a verse or two, they write it from the heart Though none of it makes sense at first, at least there is a start Pandemonium takes the best of a masterpiece at hand Letting it rot in loneliness, a forsaken piece of land The mind is screaming sevenfold for comfort and a way To make others see the good in all that lessens day by day And the vultures soar upon the earth, with its rancid dead Stealing away the masterpiece and detaining it instead They cry in the gravel below for love to overthrow Never will their cries be heard, and this I only know For in a deathful life of toil they artfully may say The words unsaid but written fresh, only to decay To seep into the ground, and back into the trees The lead and ink and everything…smearing us free
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 1/25/2013 5:58:00 PM
Dear Laura, I LOVe how masterful YOU use YOUR Rhyme. capturing The inner being of the Heart Superb Pen LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...Harry
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Date: 12/23/2011 12:01:00 PM
Hey! Laura! What a STRONG write. "Never will the cries be heard, and this I only know" simply remarkable stuff. Keep writing and keep on inspiring us dear
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Date: 12/22/2011 7:39:00 PM
what an original concept you introduced in the last line of the poem. Very interesting imagery, and thanks for your comment today. Luv,Andrea
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