Small Vamps

Small evil vampires
hungering for some red blood:
stone cold mosquitoes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Golden Avatar
September 19, 2009 at 11:38 AM
Devilish pests! What good are they to us? Hmm.... Blessings to you today. Donna
Brown Avatar
September 18, 2009 at 11:33 AM
I have read your poetry and enjoyed it. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors. You have done an excellent job writing this poem. May you have a wonderful and inspiring weekend Ismael. Love, Carol
Moreno Avatar
September 17, 2009 at 1:52 PM
Love the last line, you got me on this one...thought it was a senryu and it ended up being a haiku...clever!!!
Kendrick Avatar
September 17, 2009 at 1:34 PM
I believe or I took this one to be funny. If it is not let me know. Like the way you pulled this one together. Sara
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September 17, 2009 at 1:30 PM
Oooh, those pesky critters that feed on our blood are so annoying. Never thought of them as "vampires" before, but there is a definite semilarity! Great haiku! Love, Carolyn
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