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Small Vamps

Small evil vampires hungering for some red blood: stone cold mosquitoes

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Donna Golden

Date: 9/19/2009 11:38:00 AM

Devilish pests! What good are they to us? Hmm.... Blessings to you today. Donna

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/18/2009 11:33:00 AM

I have read your poetry and enjoyed it. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors. You have done an excellent job writing this poem. May you have a wonderful and inspiring weekend Ismael. Love, Carol

Raul Moreno

Date: 9/17/2009 1:52:00 PM

Love the last line, you got me on this one...thought it was a senryu and it ended up being a haiku...clever!!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/17/2009 1:34:00 PM

I believe or I took this one to be funny. If it is not let me know. Like the way you pulled this one together. Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/17/2009 1:30:00 PM

Oooh, those pesky critters that feed on our blood are so annoying. Never thought of them as "vampires" before, but there is a definite semilarity! Great haiku! Love, Carolyn