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  The painting is called "The Instructor"

was painted by me in July of 2001

 

Small Bit of Fame Revised

Oil painting is my passion in a perfect setting, I do possess on occasion. She's instructing the class I'm inspired, I'm a lucky lass. Brushes flow effortlessly, “The Instructor”, I dub so grand and stately. Everyone is enthusiastic when the county fair comes around again. Delicious food is consumed and down with ginger ale, buying wares that are for sale. I am admiring all the sorts of crafts and arts show, animal exhibits and Rodeo, music concert always packed and loud. Parents attempt to keep track of their children in the crowd running from side to side through the tides to get in line for the carnival rides. But, the art contest is the one I am excitedly searching for as I walk through the door. So many entries are on display. I look anxiously for mine along the way. So many I exam worthy of 1st place blue ribbon, I'm really starting to get discouraged, but I didn't. Ashamed I'm feeling as I keep searching and dreaming. Just around the corner there on the bottom row and not a loner, “The instructor”. I see my painting on display against the stone structure. There is a first place blue ribbon on its frame to my silent excitement and small bit of fame! My body calms with elated joy a smile on my face I can't seem to erase. I stand there and admire the name and the big blue ribbon on the frame. 11/30/2017
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Gauthier Avatar
May 6, 2018 at 1:34 AM
Lovely poem, Eve. Belated congrats on both your wins with your poem as well as your painting. Bravo.
Mandani Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 12:28 PM
Nice. I like it.
Gupta Avatar
December 25, 2017 at 11:19 AM
Congratulations on your nice placement, Eve ...
Pandit Avatar
December 24, 2017 at 5:51 AM
WOW! Didn't know you are a gifted painter..well deserved win ..congrats Eve.
Dietrich Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 7:42 PM
Oh, Eve, I remember this one and I see your comment now about Vienna showcasing it. That's so nice. Congrats for your win and merry christmas to you, dear.
Scars Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 10:04 AM
oh lady, you and those beautiful paintings, so proud of you!!! Congrats :) -luloo
Sinha-Roy Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 5:24 AM
Congratulations Eve on your great win. A fantastic poem.
Tripp Avatar
December 21, 2017 at 9:53 PM
Congratulations on your win.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 21, 2017 at 9:45 PM
Congratulations on your win with this wonderful pen! xomo
R. V. Avatar
December 21, 2017 at 6:56 PM
Enjoyable read, Eve. Congrats on your win:-)
Y. Avatar
December 21, 2017 at 2:38 PM
Hi Eve, I've seen several of your painting and they were amazing. It is evident painting is your "Meraki". Congratulations on your win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
One Avatar
December 21, 2017 at 2:26 PM
You are a wonderful artist and your passion is evident from that... your meraki is powerful.. Congratulations on your placement in the meraki contest..
Gupta Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 6:42 AM
WE all admire the name and "The Instructor" ... you are a creator ...
Dietrich Avatar
December 3, 2017 at 5:11 PM
I am seeing this one again, but I do not see the picture above the poem. Look and see. Maybe it's just me??? Anyway, I am hoping I have read the revised version? I still like it a LOT
Roper Avatar
December 3, 2017 at 5:50 PM
Vienna posted it on her facebook page with the picture, I am very honored by her kind gesture. :) It made me feel I in the sky :)
Dietrich Avatar
December 2, 2017 at 7:51 PM
Oh Eve, what an exciting moment that must have been. This very clearly narrates the happy moment for us. Do you have the winning picture to show us here?
Roper Avatar
December 2, 2017 at 8:14 PM
Andrea, the picture is above the poem ,,, Thank you for the wonderful compliment.
Salehi Avatar
December 2, 2017 at 6:15 PM
Your art is a mirror to your thoughts, love to see paintings as well....
Salehi Avatar
December 19, 2017 at 1:40 PM
I don't see any picture either Eve...
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 2, 2017 at 5:56 AM
Your poetry and painting are just magnificent Eve! I really admire your work. I can see why this painting won a blue ribbon. It is so intricate and you captured all so magnificently...no other word would do. I am in awe of your many talents! Kudos! A Fave! : )
Warrior Avatar
December 2, 2017 at 4:51 AM
Your talent has no bounds, Eve...great works of art my friend...god bless...^WW^
Vaso Avatar
December 1, 2017 at 2:16 AM
You know I love your paintings, you have such artistic talent, and it radiates your human compassion!
Tripp Avatar
November 30, 2017 at 10:04 PM
That is an amazing painting and write. It was nice to share such a wonderful memory of fame. Congratulations. Very cool!
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