Smack, Punch, Kick

*smack* *punch* *kick*
Behind closed doors is what you miss
On the outside, it all seems fine
On the inside, it all declines
But hide or else
You might hear yells
*smack* *punch* *kick
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Agustin Avatar
August 11, 2023 at 4:34 AM
Devoid of "*smack* *punch* *kick*"... Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
John Avatar
August 10, 2023 at 2:07 AM
Too much smacking, punching and kicking going on. You're right to use all opportunities, as you do here, to bring this kind of behaviour - abuse, mainly, of children - to people's attention, and with a good little poem, Axher Jean. Thank you.
Jean Avatar
August 10, 2023 at 8:07 AM
Omg thank you so much, I was super insecure about this poem, my friend was the one who got me to post it, but I’m trying really hard to get back into poetry!! :)
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