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Smack, Punch, Kick

*smack* *punch* *kick* Behind closed doors is what you miss On the outside, it all seems fine On the inside, it all declines But hide or else You might hear yells *smack* *punch* *kick

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Beata Agustin

Date: 8/11/2023 4:34:00 AM

Devoid of "*smack* *punch* *kick*"... Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Andrew John

Date: 8/10/2023 2:07:00 AM

Too much smacking, punching and kicking going on. You're right to use all opportunities, as you do here, to bring this kind of behaviour - abuse, mainly, of children - to people's attention, and with a good little poem, Axher Jean. Thank you.

Axher Jean
Date: 8/10/2023 8:07:00 AM

Omg thank you so much, I was super insecure about this poem, my friend was the one who got me to post it, but I’m trying really hard to get back into poetry!! :)

Tom Woody

Date: 8/9/2023 1:40:00 PM

Well, that's never a good thing