Slush

I'm never really in a rush
To traipse through gushy, mushy slush
Like that on any city street
Where puddles form from melting sleet.

The passing traffic sends up sprays
Of wetness that's seen better days
To splatter on your favorite coat
(And splash avoidance seems remote).

So in your boots just stride right through
And do what all New Yorkers do,
Which is to shrug or maybe kvetch
'Til we complete this slushy stretch.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Dietrich Avatar
February 5, 2015 at 6:39 PM
love how you got in the rhyme with Kvetch!! Cute poem, sweet Ilene! I guess I am lazier than you. I don't wish to stand up and take a shower! hahaha. I prefer to luxuriate.
Neels Avatar
February 4, 2015 at 5:05 AM
What a gem this is Ilene, you sure brought the images home to me. Luckily we still have Summer over here :) Hope your week is a brilliant one ;)
Squires Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 2:31 PM
Enjoyable read, thanks.
Allison Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 2:14 PM
Wonderful descriptive imagery Ilene - i do so love your rhymes:-) a 7 from me:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 2:11 PM
- Bad behavior by the driver ...... a great poem Ilene ! - hug // Anne-Lise :)
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