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Slurp and Shriek Dancing Deep

I heard a prattling rattling battling noise In my children’s room, in the midst of their toys Slurp and Shriek Dancing deep A battling ram came out and gave me a peek Was that a battling ram? I asked my imaginary friend. She threw flowers on me and refused to bend. Dived into the toys Making even more noise I had to drag her out when she began to shriek. What are you doing in there? Yelled the only adult in the house. I figured it was my husband not a big mouse. I saved myself By parking my butt on a shelf Pretending to be a doll, wearing my very best blouse The slurps and the shrieks went on for awhile Imaginary Sally and I had started to smile Husband came in and took a peek But ran out again when he heard a shriek Written: March 14th, 2020 Contest: A Rattling Rhyme 2 Sponsor: Nina Parmenter

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Date: 5/14/2020 3:16:00 PM
Trixie has taken over! Wow! So imaginative, Caren! :) gw
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/15/2020 5:42:00 AM
Thank you Gershon. I have to be imaginative. I have to fabricate 6 hours a day of work - in order to get paid. I am making phone calls all over the place encouraging parents to put their children into online summer school now.
Date: 5/11/2020 12:16:00 PM
Brilliant, Caren, your fun feel good imagination never fails . . . : )
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/12/2020 4:45:00 PM
Thank you Indiana I appreciate your stopping by.

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