Slumber

Flowers fade in the 
cool autumn breeze
As colors change the 
leaves on the trees
Life does begin it's 
long cold slumber
Dreaming of the long 
hot days of summer
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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De Beaulieu Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 8:33 PM
I like the way all the words flowed together in this poem. Have a nice evening my friend. Looking forward to reading more poetry. from you.
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December 23, 2016 at 11:48 PM
wonderful poem!!!!! congrats on being featured+++++++++++++++
Teagan Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 11:38 AM
Hi Michael, this is a sweet first poem... I love the thought of a cool autumn breeze and the leaves change colors. Welcome to Poetry Soup! ((hugs))
Thompson Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 12:30 PM
Thank you Rebecca. Glad to be here. ((Hugs))
Thompson Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 12:02 PM
Thank you Rebecca. Glad to be here. ((Hugs))
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