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Slumber

Flowers fade in the cool autumn breeze As colors change the leaves on the trees Life does begin it's long cold slumber Dreaming of the long hot days of summer

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/1/2017 8:33:00 PM
I like the way all the words flowed together in this poem. Have a nice evening my friend. Looking forward to reading more poetry. from you.
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Date: 12/23/2016 11:48:00 PM
wonderful poem!!!!! congrats on being featured+++++++++++++++
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Date: 11/30/2016 11:38:00 AM
Hi Michael, this is a sweet first poem... I love the thought of a cool autumn breeze and the leaves change colors. Welcome to Poetry Soup! ((hugs))
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Michael Thompson
Date: 11/30/2016 12:30:00 PM
Thank you Rebecca. Glad to be here. ((Hugs))
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Michael Thompson
Date: 11/30/2016 12:02:00 PM
Thank you Rebecca. Glad to be here. ((Hugs))