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Heavy eyes and muffled sounds, Unaware of what's around. As darkness comes, silence prevails, Close thy eyes to see what entails. Could it be a world where there is peace? Or a realm filled with your darkest fears? Perhaps there will be joy and unending cheers, Or we'll be welcomed by unending tears. Delve into the dark abyss, Swim unto the depths of unending bliss. Pain and terror hath no permanent place, For all is well in the valley of dreams. So close your eyes and you shall see, A realm better than reality. But be wary, heed my warn, Stay and you shall never see the sun. 06/23/16

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 7/22/2016 2:07:00 AM
Well written, I like it.
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Date: 6/23/2016 9:49:00 PM
Louie, well done. linda
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Louie Jean Gutierrez
Date: 6/24/2016 5:44:00 AM
Thank you so much
Date: 6/23/2016 3:10:00 PM
Louie... Excellent post....skat
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Louie Jean Gutierrez
Date: 6/24/2016 5:44:00 AM
Thanks :)
Date: 6/23/2016 9:08:00 AM
That is so true Louie as a lot of people die in their sleep! Good one!:)
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Louie Jean Gutierrez
Date: 6/24/2016 5:44:00 AM
Exactly. I find it creepy yet fascinating. Sad too
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Louie Jean Gutierrez
Date: 6/24/2016 5:42:00 AM
Exactly. I find it creepy yet fascinating. Sad too

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