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Slumber

p.d. Blackness crawls upon the pillow, sidestep it, dodging like a willow, play the game of 'me no never mind,' see it stumbling far behind, laugh in its face our Bilbo, like.... "me no never mind" Don hold your breath as demons pass, they can't enter, still as glass, get a grip upon your soul, outcast entitys till you're whole, ah yes, alone at last... p d's repulsive slumber

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Date: 11/19/2011 4:58:00 AM
Hey Don thanks for stopping by, nice seeing you...check you have soup....luv shannon
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Date: 11/13/2011 10:29:00 PM
wow! Don,, I seen the title.. and wondered... and your comment had me fickle... yes... deep and alone... and very deep are my demons... i think they are above all other ones in my past... now how about that... outcast.. truly love your poem... i will get a grip now... and stay away from my dreams... thank you..for this..p.d.
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Date: 11/14/2011 1:54:00 AM
Sorry p.d., i open me mouth n words fall out, flopping about like a fresh caught trout, we all have demons seeking time, to disturb this world of yours n mine, control is sometimes doubt?
Date: 11/13/2011 4:37:00 PM
Going to sleep is too scary. Great write.
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Date: 11/13/2011 4:09:00 PM
You two have created a wonderful collaboration! I'm so glad I read this one tonight! You both are superior poets! Fantastic work, both of you!!
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Date: 11/13/2011 4:07:00 PM
i liked it don how you been? cory
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