Slumber

p.d. Blackness crawls upon the pillow, sidestep it, dodging like a willow, play the game of 'me no never mind,' see it stumbling far behind, laugh in its face our Bilbo, like.... "me no never mind" Don hold your breath as demons pass, they can't enter, still as glass, get a grip upon your soul, outcast entitys till you're whole, ah yes, alone at last... p d's repulsive slumber
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Deane Avatar
November 19, 2011 at 4:58 AM
Hey Don thanks for stopping by, nice seeing you...check you have soup....luv shannon
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November 13, 2011 at 10:29 PM
wow! Don,, I seen the title.. and wondered... and your comment had me fickle... yes... deep and alone... and very deep are my demons... i think they are above all other ones in my past... now how about that... outcast.. truly love your poem... i will get a grip now... and stay away from my dreams... thank you..for this..p.d.
Johnson Avatar
November 14, 2011 at 1:54 AM
Sorry p.d., i open me mouth n words fall out, flopping about like a fresh caught trout, we all have demons seeking time, to disturb this world of yours n mine, control is sometimes doubt?
Smith Avatar
November 13, 2011 at 4:37 PM
Going to sleep is too scary. Great write.
Sivey Avatar
November 13, 2011 at 4:09 PM
You two have created a wonderful collaboration! I'm so glad I read this one tonight! You both are superior poets! Fantastic work, both of you!!
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November 13, 2011 at 4:07 PM
i liked it don how you been? cory
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