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Slowly you took me in, you let me go you taught me what I need to know. You were my friend, you were the worst but in the end you always fixed the hurt when I was lost, I came to you though you never quite got the clue So why can't you see what's happening, slowly ,I'm fallin over you slowly, I don't know what to do slowly, im starting to think that I wont get through slowly ,I'm fallin over you slowly ,I'm findin what to do slowly, you're fallin for me too now I don't know what to do if you can't get a clue then I can't be with or without you

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Date: 4/29/2011 5:02:00 PM
Nice flow, it almost reads like a song.
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Date: 4/27/2011 4:29:00 PM
I can picture this whole thing unfolding.. Great write. Thanks for stopping by and sharing your comments with me on my poem. I love getting feed back.. Have a wonderful night Cory
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