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UM these next few poems i have will be UNFINISHED SONGS!!!!! i will edit them when i finish them so tell me what you think thanks Can't go further cant go back you know I love you you know in care but I’m tired of pulling out my hair your like a ball and I don’t know what to wear your like a jail and I have no one to help me bail sorry baby but we're going stale just let me go don’t say you care cuz it only makes it harder to bear because of you I cant breathe all because I wore my heart on my sleeve you honestly made me believe we could be just let me go don’t say you care I’m tired of this wear and tear because of you I lost sleep don’t remind me of what we used to be why cant you see its over baby p.s don't have title for this song any suggestions?

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Date: 4/27/2011 5:48:00 AM
A promising write. I think it does need a little editing and honing, but well worth keeping! As for a title...I would wait until you know it is finished, then read through it before you decide. Good luck in your writing! Robert.
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