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Slow-Burn Puppy Love

Sunlight
steadily focused 
through the magnifying glass
over an infinitesimal piece of hay 
takes some time
to spark a flame. 
Falling in love 
for the first time 
was the same way for me.
Sitting right next to a pretty girl
In high school, 
as shy as I was. And I knew
We liked each other. 
One fine day, in class,
I swallowed hard,
drew in a deep breath 
and then whispered
Into her right ear...
"I like you, "
Much to my surprise , 
she replied...
"I like you, too."
And that was...
the beginning
of our story


Date written: 06/21/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Roper Avatar
June 27, 2018 at 7:58 PM
Edward, congratulations on your win.. you brought memories with this write. I had the crush, but he had it for another.. Hugs Eve ~`*
Ibeh Avatar
June 27, 2018 at 8:08 PM
Thank you very much, Eve! He missed out:-)
Gentry Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 11:59 PM
Congratulations on your win with this sweet story of young love. Well done! :)
Ibeh Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 3:41 PM
Thank you, Susan!
Pandit Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 7:07 AM
Congrats on your win, Edward.
Ibeh Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 3:39 PM
Thank you so much, Vijay!
One Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 7:06 AM
Lucky guy.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Ibeh Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 3:38 PM
Thank you very much for placing me, SO!
Dietrich Avatar
June 21, 2018 at 7:45 PM
ahh, such a sweet telling of early love. I recall the brainiac of my 9th grade writing me a note that said, "you are very attractive" We kind of walked around a bit together. He was kind of an albino with whitish hair. I learned later he became a famous doctor or something. Too bad we only lasted a week. I could have ended up a rich woman!!
Ibeh Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 2:44 PM
That's really sweet, Andrea. Early love is rarely everlasting, lol. Thanks for sharing!:-)
Nance Avatar
June 21, 2018 at 4:49 PM
aww cute
Ibeh Avatar
June 21, 2018 at 5:01 PM
Puppy love is unfailingly cute:-) Thanks for the comment and visit, Casarah!
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