Slow Love Slow Death

Slowly you entered my life
Slowly you made it beautiful
Slowly I took you to be mine
Slowly this life became wonderful

Slowly you made me love you
Slowly it increased with time
Slowly I was all yours
Slowly life became melodious as a rhyme

Slowly from me you got bored
Slowly you lost all interest
Slowly you craved to move on
Slowly I was left in a state of unrest

Slowly you left me
Slowly I became depressed and cold
Slowly I choked down, 'caus
Slowly I caught death in my hold
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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December 31, 2015 at 9:48 PM
that's deep, enjoyed reading your tonight. Hope to see you active this coming year. Goodbye, 2015 --- Hello 2016. God Bless. SKAT
Minardi Avatar
September 14, 2011 at 11:11 AM
Love the last line, -I caught death in my hold-
Singh Avatar
September 15, 2011 at 4:06 AM
thanks Dinda..its great to have your comments
Sweetheart Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 2:38 PM
a moving emotional write Guneet and a romantic piece with brilliant beginning and untimely ending luv.. nothing lasts forever..shame.. even luv.. fascinating piece luv..
Singh Avatar
September 15, 2011 at 4:07 AM
thanks a lot Linda for the lovely comment.
Brown Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 10:59 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Guneet.
Singh Avatar
September 15, 2011 at 4:08 AM
thanks carol. have a nice day.
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