Slow Down

Freeways are
a place where
we all travel
saving time,
but missing
so much along
the way,
nature knows
how to enjoy
life we should
do same.

wrote 9-9-08
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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September 9, 2008 at 4:29 PM
James we should always slow down and smell the roses, slow down and just enjoy life period, a simple but elegant write, take care D-nyce
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September 9, 2008 at 4:27 PM
We are lucky here, it's nothing but back roads on dirt. :) Love the mesage, Kristin
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September 9, 2008 at 3:52 PM
Great advice. If only it were so easy. Love, shar
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