Slow Down

rushed to jump out of bed
slipped and fell - woke up dead

Pithy Pome Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Maureen McGreevy
11/1/19
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Marcum Wong Avatar
November 18, 2019 at 11:49 AM
Congratulations on your podium when Timothy. This can so easily happen. I love the humor in it. : ) xxoo
Mcguire Avatar
November 18, 2019 at 2:51 PM
Thank you Connie!
Wolf Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 6:01 PM
'woke up dead' -- Ha! Chuckling away over this one. Congrats, Timothy! :) gw
Mcguire Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 7:04 PM
Thanks Gershon!
Drowley Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 11:52 AM
'Timothy, Loved it. Congratulations on your win! Please don't slip and fall. David'
Mcguire Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 7:04 PM
Ill be careful thanks!
Gauthier Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 9:51 AM
Love it. Congrats on your well deserved podium finish, Timothy.
Mcguire Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 7:05 PM
Thank you Line<3
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 8:17 AM
Made me giggle out loud. Thank you Tim and congratulations on your win! xomo
Mcguire Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 7:05 PM
Thank you Double M :) <3
Gauthier Avatar
November 1, 2019 at 9:26 PM
You're on a roll with excellent poetry, Timothy.
Mcguire Avatar
November 1, 2019 at 10:18 PM
Thank you friend
Rodrigues Avatar
November 1, 2019 at 9:01 PM
Wow! Well done, Timothy!
Mcguire Avatar
November 1, 2019 at 10:18 PM
Thank you Kim
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