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rushed to jump out of bed slipped and fell - woke up dead Pithy Pome Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Maureen McGreevy 11/1/19

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Date: 11/18/2019 11:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your podium when Timothy. This can so easily happen. I love the humor in it. : ) xxoo
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Timothy McGuire
Date: 11/18/2019 2:51:00 PM
Thank you Connie!
Date: 11/14/2019 6:01:00 PM
'woke up dead' -- Ha! Chuckling away over this one. Congrats, Timothy! :) gw
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Timothy McGuire
Date: 11/14/2019 7:04:00 PM
Thanks Gershon!
Date: 11/14/2019 11:52:00 AM
'Timothy, Loved it. Congratulations on your win! Please don't slip and fall. David'
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Timothy McGuire
Date: 11/14/2019 7:04:00 PM
Ill be careful thanks!
Date: 11/14/2019 9:51:00 AM
Love it. Congrats on your well deserved podium finish, Timothy.
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Timothy McGuire
Date: 11/14/2019 7:05:00 PM
Thank you Line<3
Date: 11/14/2019 8:17:00 AM
Made me giggle out loud. Thank you Tim and congratulations on your win! xomo
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Timothy McGuire
Date: 11/14/2019 7:05:00 PM
Thank you Double M :) <3
Date: 11/1/2019 9:26:00 PM
You're on a roll with excellent poetry, Timothy.
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Timothy McGuire
Date: 11/1/2019 10:18:00 PM
Thank you friend
Date: 11/1/2019 9:01:00 PM
Wow! Well done, Timothy!
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Timothy McGuire
Date: 11/1/2019 10:18:00 PM
Thank you Kim