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rushed to jump out of bed slipped and fell - woke up dead Pithy Pome Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Maureen McGreevy 11/1/19

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/18/2019 11:49:00 AM

Congratulations on your podium when Timothy. This can so easily happen. I love the humor in it. : ) xxoo

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 11/18/2019 2:51:00 PM

Thank you Connie!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/14/2019 6:01:00 PM

'woke up dead' -- Ha! Chuckling away over this one. Congrats, Timothy! :) gw

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 11/14/2019 7:04:00 PM

Thanks Gershon!

David Drowley

Date: 11/14/2019 11:52:00 AM

'Timothy, Loved it. Congratulations on your win! Please don't slip and fall. David'

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 11/14/2019 7:04:00 PM

Ill be careful thanks!

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/14/2019 9:51:00 AM

Love it. Congrats on your well deserved podium finish, Timothy.

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 11/14/2019 7:05:00 PM

Thank you Line<3

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 11/14/2019 8:17:00 AM

Made me giggle out loud. Thank you Tim and congratulations on your win! xomo

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 11/14/2019 7:05:00 PM

Thank you Double M :) <3

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/1/2019 9:26:00 PM

You're on a roll with excellent poetry, Timothy.

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 11/1/2019 10:18:00 PM

Thank you friend

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/1/2019 9:01:00 PM

Wow! Well done, Timothy!

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 11/1/2019 10:18:00 PM

Thank you Kim