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Slow and Fast Time

Time moves very slowly when climbing the mountain When going down the slope, time has a fast speed to entertain Sponsor: Black Eyed Susan Contes: Time-single rhyming couplet Written: August 30, 2012 Poulter's Measure

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Chipepo Lwele

Date: 9/19/2012 8:51:00 PM

Time is also fast when mind is occupied with work.Lovely and grandeur.

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 9/3/2012 7:19:00 AM

Very nice Couplet. Good luck in the contest. Lucilla

Jack Horne

Date: 9/1/2012 1:44:00 PM

yes, such truth here!

Kash Poet

Date: 8/31/2012 11:56:00 PM

Very good couplet here on time .Best wishes to you Sara.

Joe Maverick

Date: 8/31/2012 1:52:00 PM

Hey Sara; you are gtting me worried,cause I've been climbing this damn thing a long while now..! and I still cant see the top.. I wonder how old and how fast I;m gonna be coming down the other side?? gee I hope it aint no razorback..)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/31/2012 5:18:00 AM

AN AWESOME THOUGHT AND OH SO VERY TRUE sARA .. A WINNING WONDER FOR A TOP NOTCH ENTRY LUV ..

Mad Hu

Date: 8/31/2012 4:25:00 AM

VERY THOUGHTFUL

Erich Goller

Date: 8/30/2012 8:27:00 PM

Slow and fast indeed, When I was young time seemed to move slow, now in the senior years time seems to move very fast, A very nice expressd couplet, Thanks for sharing it, God bless you.Hugs!Erich

Brandi Simpson

Date: 8/30/2012 7:11:00 PM

Very true. I found this out climbing a HILL the first time I went sledding. The 2 & 3 line poems fascinate me. I love it!