Slow and Fast Time

Time moves very slowly when climbing the mountain
When going down the slope, time has a fast speed to entertain

Sponsor: Black Eyed Susan
Contes: Time-single rhyming couplet
Written: August 30, 2012

Poulter's Measure
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Lwele Avatar
September 19, 2012 at 8:51 PM
Time is also fast when mind is occupied with work.Lovely and grandeur.
Carrillo Avatar
September 3, 2012 at 7:19 AM
Very nice Couplet. Good luck in the contest. Lucilla
Horne Avatar
September 1, 2012 at 1:44 PM
yes, such truth here!
Poet Avatar
August 31, 2012 at 11:56 PM
Very good couplet here on time .Best wishes to you Sara.
Maverick Avatar
August 31, 2012 at 1:52 PM
Hey Sara; you are gtting me worried,cause I've been climbing this damn thing a long while now..! and I still cant see the top.. I wonder how old and how fast I;m gonna be coming down the other side?? gee I hope it aint no razorback..)
Sweetheart Avatar
August 31, 2012 at 5:18 AM
AN AWESOME THOUGHT AND OH SO VERY TRUE sARA .. A WINNING WONDER FOR A TOP NOTCH ENTRY LUV ..
Hu Avatar
August 31, 2012 at 4:25 AM
VERY THOUGHTFUL
Goller Avatar
August 30, 2012 at 8:27 PM
Slow and fast indeed, When I was young time seemed to move slow, now in the senior years time seems to move very fast, A very nice expressd couplet, Thanks for sharing it, God bless you.Hugs!Erich
Simpson Avatar
August 30, 2012 at 7:11 PM
Very true. I found this out climbing a HILL the first time I went sledding. The 2 & 3 line poems fascinate me. I love it!
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